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Holly cow I didn't expect that - great stuff!! The sunset in the eye was a bit weird but other than that your style of animation is brilliant.
:D
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Nice, could have been a tad longer but the characterisation was great!
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It was ok - you needed more variety in what the sticks were doing, you needed a background, and more SFX, towards the end it got a bit more interesting but it took to long to get there, the begining is boring. And try using the smoother tool for your sticks - makes them look nicer.
Author's Response:
Okay, well most of that resides in your opinion. The smoother always ticked me off, so I just don't use that. Too wily. The sound effects I added in bulk... I think I have enough. The point IS that it DOESN'T have a background. It was simple because I wanted it that way. Also, I tried to restrain from them using powers for as long as I can. I think the powers are more boring myself.
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Wow, thats a very original idea, and its really nice. Love how the scenery animates in. the only downside to that is that somtimes the character gets lost in the BG.
Good work.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'll keep that in mind, the character getting lost thing, for future stuff, thanks for the feedback!
Moro
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I didn't enjoy that, it might have been ok if you had used flash to animate bodys and put the heads on them but instead it looked super tacky.
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I dont know why i liked that as much as i did! Pure gold, you get the six for the comedy side, work a bit more on the animation. But i think that lazy animation suited that.
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That was fantastic! Those engery surges are brill!!
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man that was insane! Just brilliant, great fuidity in your sticks and the music suited the animation to the ground, really good stuff!
btw nice motion blur style on the machette!
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Yeh, i like it! good work - just make sure the audio doesn't clip - because it makes things sound tacky. Good animation and lip sync - funny plot, you could afford to spice up your preloader a bit but otherwise top notch stuff for your first completed flash!
Author's Response:
Thankyou very much! An 8? Very honest. Usually it's either 10 or 0.
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The sounds were a little abrupt, but the animation was ok... not great but ok. You need to keep the background constant otherwise viewers wont understand whats happening... Otherwise it was ok -
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