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I'm really not sure what that was... Increase your frame rate, practice your drawing, add a STORY, make your shots clear so people no wat they are seeing, sound fx, use a smaller brush, add voice overs, make it 10 times longer.
Author's Response:
I can do everything in that but voice overs.
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Yeah it was ok, An Improvment on your last one.
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Um... I liked the style of your animation, that for me was why i gave you 3.
A couple of pointers:
1. Add sound and perhanps music to make it more interesting
2. make it a tad longer
3. Add a preloader and put a stop action at the end of your movie so it's possible for you to click the button.
Otherwise good work.
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That was ok, the plot was a tad bizzare and the animation lacked a bit of detail. but it wasn't bad. I think with a bit more time you could do something nice with that.
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actually the drawing and animating was really quite good - just needed to be 100 times longer.
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yeah, you really needed sound for that. If i were you i'd draw your stick figures with the line tool - because the brush getts a bit messy. keep on animating though.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I like the brush a little better but im gonna work on getting good with the line tool, might work out better in the long run, thanks for the advice.
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That was fantastic! Models of the tanks and fighter jets were great! You don't by any chance have the NG tank as a .3ds able for download or sumthing??
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very well done, great work.
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It was ok...
I suggest you draw you sticks with the line tool - cause it's much neater and more clear to understand whats going on.
A little more variation in SFX would be good. Otherwise just keep on animating and you'll get better.
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'I was joking about the tuna..' Great line.
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