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Hmmm... A bit plotless but funny... And since when did a hand grenade make a nuclear explosion... Is it a Nuclear Grenade? good work.
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the point is he should of done a barrel roll.
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yeah, out of all the madness remakes, that ones pretty good. The first grafiti you could have used a bigger line to look more realistic. The endings nice - my only problem is the text. It moved way too much for dialouge - maybe just fade it up and down.
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Yeah I know. . Sry xD
I will make the next one better. . . IF I make another one . . .
everyone just get's so pissy when you try to make something >_>
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It was ok - you needed more variety in what the sticks were doing, you needed a background, and more SFX, towards the end it got a bit more interesting but it took to long to get there, the begining is boring. And try using the smoother tool for your sticks - makes them look nicer.
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Okay, well most of that resides in your opinion. The smoother always ticked me off, so I just don't use that. Too wily. The sound effects I added in bulk... I think I have enough. The point IS that it DOESN'T have a background. It was simple because I wanted it that way. Also, I tried to restrain from them using powers for as long as I can. I think the powers are more boring myself.
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Wow, thats a very original idea, and its really nice. Love how the scenery animates in. the only downside to that is that somtimes the character gets lost in the BG.
Good work.
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Thanks! I'll keep that in mind, the character getting lost thing, for future stuff, thanks for the feedback!
Moro
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Yeh, i like it! good work - just make sure the audio doesn't clip - because it makes things sound tacky. Good animation and lip sync - funny plot, you could afford to spice up your preloader a bit but otherwise top notch stuff for your first completed flash!
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Thankyou very much! An 8? Very honest. Usually it's either 10 or 0.
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I'm really not sure what that was... Increase your frame rate, practice your drawing, add a STORY, make your shots clear so people no wat they are seeing, sound fx, use a smaller brush, add voice overs, make it 10 times longer.
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I can do everything in that but voice overs.
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yeah, you really needed sound for that. If i were you i'd draw your stick figures with the line tool - because the brush getts a bit messy. keep on animating though.
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Yeah, I like the brush a little better but im gonna work on getting good with the line tool, might work out better in the long run, thanks for the advice.
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